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Here's to Worthless Dreams by ~Iselen:iconIselen:





Copy and paste your ambiguous rhymes,
Year after year, you gather dust,
They'll spit you out, but step in line.

Nobody, nothing, we tried to incline,
But thoughts fell short, we earned your distrust
Copy and paste your ambiguous rhymes.

When the years go by, you're forced to resign,
Future times never share the same old lust,
They'll spit you out, but step in line.

Wander aimlessly through the times,
And remember the days we said to adjust
Copy and paste your ambiguous rhymes.

What everyone yearns, you needed to shine,
But your beautiful glow dulled with the rust,
They'll spit you out, but step in line.

We accept you now, serene and benign,
Broken and worn, gave up as you must,
Copy and paste your ambigious rhymes,
They'll spit you out, but step in line.
©2004-2009 ~Iselen
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Author's Comments

I wanted to write a villanelle. I eventually got inspired, though I don't really like villanelles much.

This is for all the people who refuse to accept they're nothing.
All the people who's dreams I want to shatter, to curse and to break.

I wish you nothing but the best.
But then again, I lie.

The stock is from Kristy Victoria.
The brushes are from Bunkertor and Aleksandra.

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:iconfrideswide:
nice, very nice i like this very much
:iconxexa:
that's neat. I like it. is it you on the top pic? beautiful..

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:iconiselen:
You have a lovely icon. :)

And no, the picture is stock, which was mentioned in the description.

Thank you for your comment. :)

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LOL.
:iconiselen:
Thank you. :)

I was rather worried what people might think ot a villanelle. It's not my favourite choice of structure for a poem.

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LOL.
:iconxexa:
thanx. and sorry, I didn't read the description ...

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:icongard-helset:
cool nuff, not my particular taste but still cool.
i dont know wtf a villanelle is, so i dont care. =P

you'll never be able to drag me down! i KNOW im good! :mwahaha:

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:iconstarsplitter:
I didn't even know you wrote poetry.
:iconslaymaker:
At first I thought the repetative ness would be boring. But actually, it kind of fit after a while oO;;

Nice ! -claps her on the back- you're going to be another Rancor aye?

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:iconledizzer-stock:
FOMG U CAN BE A GOFFICK POET N LIEK CUT OFF UR EAR N STUFFZ

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:iconseasaidh:
<3

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